Thursday, April 14, 2011

journal 6 (poem)

every morning, waking up

take my books, warming up

make my coffee, drink it up

drive my car, speed it up

start a lab, finish it up

study a book, give it up

take a test, mess it up

                                                                                I am sorry I couldn't finish it




2 comments:

  1. hahahahaha good job Abdulaziz
    I hope you will do better in the next test
    :)

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  2. Poetry is something that everyone is entitled to do...you don't have to be "special" or have a "gift" to be able to express yourself in this way. This wasn't a test, but moreso a chance to free ourselves from the idea that we aren't allowed to let our creative juices flow in this manner. It's just another way of expressing ourselves :)

    Personally, I thought the rhythm of your poem very fascinating and very energetic. I hope at some point you will finish it!

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